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*postaldude66 May 14, 2009, 4:50:13 AM
The lighting of this one is good too. i like this technique and the effect it seems to have.

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“Fire is the sun unwinding itself from the wood”.
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~AWSD May 14, 2009, 4:51:10 AM
Thanks, what dont u like about it?
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*postaldude66 May 14, 2009, 4:55:55 AM
nothing really, most decent photos have nothing wrong with them per se, its just that they lack the 'wow factor' where composition/focus/ lighting/shape all fall into place perfectly somehow. i like this shot though.

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“Fire is the sun unwinding itself from the wood”.
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~AWSD May 14, 2009, 6:01:12 AM
i need to work im my wow factor :D thanks for the feedback !
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~bousozoku May 17, 2009, 8:06:58 PM
This one has a real quiet wow factor. It's almost as though I can hear the music and feel the emotion behind it all. It has a sort of cozy coffee house feel.

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I'm giving up. Aren't you glad?
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~bousozoku May 17, 2009, 10:25:41 PM
You're welcome.

I hope it didn't sound stupid but I've tried several times to say something since the watch and that's the best I could do.

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I'm giving up. Aren't you glad?
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`lazybutt May 23, 2009, 5:55:36 PM
Good composition here. I think the crop of the image works well with the face as the main part of the image - but to me, the guitar should play more into the main focus of the image. Your model seems very interested in it, thus making the viewer want to be a part of his experience. I think that pulling the bottom corners out a bit could solve this.

Overall I like the lighting that you have used in this series of photographs, although here it seems to bring out a smudges on the guitar which work as a distraction. I think that for this shot a good cleaning of the surface of the guitar would have done the photo more justice.

I do like this photo, though. His guitar is almost audible.. :)
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~AWSD May 24, 2009, 11:44:33 PM
Yes i agree with the smudges on the guitar i didnt relize till i put the images onto the computer. I would like to add more of the guitar to the image but thats all that was in the fram. Thank you for you'r detailed feedback :D
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Canon EOS 400D DIGITAL
1/200 second
F/29.0
30 mm
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May 12, 2009, 9:36:30 AM

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